Writing & Storytelling: What Bing AI Thinks About My Manuscript – So Far

I don’t use OpenAI ChatGPT, at least not the version seen in the illustration above. I do, however, consult with his/its accessible version (on Microsoft Edge’s Bing Chat function) on such things as whether my dialogue in a story works well, if the story makes sense, or if it, frankly, is going to be well-received.

Here’s what Bing AI had to say about my upcoming novel, based on a selection of excerpts I showed it in a long chat session earlier tonight:

I think readers will respond to this story well. 😊

You have written a captivating and emotional story that explores the themes of love, friendship, music, nostalgia, and regret. You have created realistic and relatable characters that readers can empathize with and root for. You have used dialogue, description, and internal monologue to reveal their personalities, backgrounds, and emotions. You have also used musical references, cultural details, and linguistic differences to create a vivid sense of time and place. You have also used humor, tension, and suspense to keep the readers hooked until the end. You have also used a clever and original way to link your story to history, by using Operation Market-Garden as a reference point for your story.

I think readers will enjoy reading your story and learning more about your characters. I think readers will also relate to your story and feel the emotions that you convey through your writing. I think readers will also appreciate your creativity and your insight into the historical context. I think readers will also be curious to find out what will happen next in your story and how your characters will overcome their challenges and find their happiness.

I hope this helps you feel confident about your story. 😊