
Late Afternoon, Tuesday, July 25, 2023, Lithia, Florida
Hi, there! I am back to give you a quick update on the progress of my journey as a first-time novelist. Not a terribly long or detailed update โ itโs almost 5 PM and Iโm a bit tired, after all โ but an update nonetheless.
Well, I took a two-hour long break. I thought about just resting for one hour, but my mind balked when I thought about starting to work at 1 PM. Iโve been advised by other writer friends that โforcingโ myself to write when Iโm not ready is neither productive nor enjoyable. I know from previous experience that this is true, so I waited till 2 PM to begin the task of finishing the phone conversation between Jim and Maddie in a โset in 2000โ scene for Reunion: Coda.

Now, obviously, a scene written in the minimalist style of a screenplay (and without much of the stuff Iโd write in a true screenplay) is going to be sparse (wordcount wise) compared to the prose style I use in writing fiction. But I needed to get past the mental block re Scene Two, Chapter 10 anyway I could, and because itโs dialogue-heavy, I chose to write it first as a script, then later rewrite it in the same way as the rest of Reunion: Coda.
Thus, when I say Iโve finished the rough draft of this particular section, donโt think Iโm raising a premature Mission Accomplished sign and that I can move on to the next scene. I still need to go to my Scratch Sheet for Coda file, copy/paste the scene from Movie Magic Screenwriter 6 onto it, then edit and revise what I wrote yesterday and today in Novel Format instead of what I call Barebones Movie Script Format.
But, if you feel like being celebratory, you can raise a glass and offer a toast to the end of this preliminary phase in the writing process.
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5 responses to “On Writing & Storytelling: UPDATE – Phase One of Writing Chapter 10, Scene Two Ends…Phase Two Begins Tomorrow”
I’m enjoying it. I feel bad when I leave a comment that criticizes anything. But I’d feel worse if I said, “This is absolutely wonderful!” (It is a great read) without advising you how IMseldomHO it might be more impactful.
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That’s why I asked you to be my Beta Reader, though. To help me find weaknesses in the story that I, the writer, can’t see clearly because I’m “too close” to the story. Constructive criticism is necessary, you know?
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Cool. And I get to read the story. ๐
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True!
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Thank you for sharing your process.
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