On Writing & Storytelling: UPDATE – Phase One of Writing Chapter 10, Scene Two Ends…Phase Two Begins Tomorrow


A view from Movie Magic Screenwriter 6 at the start of today’s writing period.

Late Afternoon, Tuesday, July 25, 2023, Lithia, Florida

Hi, there! I am back to give you a quick update on the progress of my journey as a first-time novelist. Not a terribly long or detailed update โ€“ itโ€™s almost 5 PM and Iโ€™m a bit tired, after all โ€“ but an update nonetheless.

Well, I took a two-hour long break. I thought about just resting for one hour, but my mind balked when I thought about starting to work at 1 PM. Iโ€™ve been advised by other writer friends that โ€œforcingโ€ myself to write when Iโ€™m not ready is neither productive nor enjoyable. I know from previous experience that this is true, so I waited till 2 PM to begin the task of finishing the phone conversation between Jim and Maddie in a โ€œset in 2000โ€ scene for Reunion: Coda.

Now, obviously, a scene written in the minimalist style of a screenplay (and without much of the stuff Iโ€™d write in a true screenplay) is going to be sparse (wordcount wise) compared to the prose style I use in writing fiction. But I needed to get past the mental block re Scene Two, Chapter 10 anyway I could, and because itโ€™s dialogue-heavy, I chose to write it first as a script, then later rewrite it in the same way as the rest of Reunion: Coda.

Thus, when I say Iโ€™ve finished the rough draft of this particular section, donโ€™t think Iโ€™m raising a premature Mission Accomplished sign and that I can move on to the next scene. I still need to go to my Scratch Sheet for Coda file, copy/paste the scene from Movie Magic Screenwriter 6 onto it, then edit and revise what I wrote yesterday and today in Novel Format instead of what I call Barebones Movie Script Format.

But, if you feel like being celebratory, you can raise a glass and offer a toast to the end of this preliminary phase in the writing process.


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5 responses to “On Writing & Storytelling: UPDATE – Phase One of Writing Chapter 10, Scene Two Ends…Phase Two Begins Tomorrow”

  1. I’m enjoying it. I feel bad when I leave a comment that criticizes anything. But I’d feel worse if I said, “This is absolutely wonderful!” (It is a great read) without advising you how IMseldomHO it might be more impactful.

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    1. That’s why I asked you to be my Beta Reader, though. To help me find weaknesses in the story that I, the writer, can’t see clearly because I’m “too close” to the story. Constructive criticism is necessary, you know?

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      1. Cool. And I get to read the story. ๐Ÿ™‚

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    henhouselady

    Thank you for sharing your process.

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