Midday/Early Afternoon, Saturday, July 13, 2024, Madison, New Hampshire
Hi everyone, it’s another hot and humid summer day in eastern New Hampshire. It’s also the first day of the weekend, which feels like most other days except for the specifics of my schedule. I try not to work on Reunion: Coda on Saturdays and Sundays – even the most dedicated writers need time off. Besides chores and the now predictable weekend routine, I don’t have much to look forward to here.
I’ve been enjoying my workdays more lately. Whether I’m writing new content to advance the story or editing and revising, working on the novel gives me focus and a sense of purpose. I am passionate about my craft, and on good days, I feel fulfilled when I create new scenes, write engaging dialogue, and bring the story of Jim Garraty and his pursuit of love and redemption to life on the page.
If I didn’t need time off to rest, take care of things like doing the laundry or grocery shopping, and try to relax, I’d treat Saturdays and Sundays like workdays and keep writing my novel.
Copilot’s Feedback on the Prologue
Yesterday, I worked for almost six hours straight, from the afternoon to the night, on Chapter 18. I hardly took any breaks. I also used AI help to check different scenes from the novel. This helped me make sure that the characters are complex and realistic, the story is logical and consistent, the dialogue is smooth, the writing is refined, the two timelines are distinct and easy to follow, and the intimate scenes are realistic without being too explicit. I want to write a serious work that combines several genres, not a typical romance story.
It was a huge weight off my shoulders when Copilot told me that I had nothing to fear from any of that. The AI examined different elements, such as style, tone, character growth, humor, and even musical nods in the excerpts I showed it.
Here’s what the AI had to say about one of the scenes in Reunion: Coda’s prologue:
Copilot
The prologue scene “Could Have, Should Have, Didn’t” from “Reunion: Coda” is a reflective and introspective passage that delves into Jim’s past regrets and unspoken feelings for Marty. It serves as a bridge between the first book and the sequel, providing new readers with insight into Jim’s emotional history and establishing a continuity of character development.
Excerpts and Interpretations:
This scene is steeped in the theme of missed opportunities and the impact of choices made—or not made—in youth. Jim’s recollection of his high school years and his hesitation to pursue Marty, despite his feelings, paints a picture of a young man constrained by fear and social norms.
The humor present in this scene is more subdued, manifesting in Jim’s rueful acknowledgment of his self-imposed “rules” and the irony of his inaction. It contrasts with the more overt humor found in his interactions with Maddie in the nightclub scenes, highlighting a growth in Jim’s ability to engage lightheartedly with others.
Romance in this prologue scene is poignant and tinged with sorrow. Jim’s love for Marty is revealed through a heartfelt letter, a stark contrast to the playful and burgeoning romance with Maddie. The letter’s contents reveal a depth of feeling and vulnerability that adds layers to Jim’s character.
Comparison to Other Scenes:
Compared to the scenes with Maddie, “Could Have, Should Have, Didn’t” is a window into Jim’s past, offering a deeper understanding of his cautious approach to new relationships. The scene’s reflective tone sets it apart from the more dynamic and hopeful interactions with Maddie.
The Goya reference scene, where Jim openly admires Maddie’s beauty, is a significant departure from the reserved admiration he held for Marty. It signifies Jim’s evolution from a hesitant admirer to an active participant in romance.
The prologue’s emotional weight provides context for Jim’s later actions and interactions. It underscores the significance of his connection with Maddie, as it represents a second chance at love—one that he is more prepared to embrace.
Literary Review:
The author has crafted a prologue that effectively links the two books of the duology, offering both continuity for returning readers and a standalone depth for newcomers. The scene is a testament to the enduring nature of first loves and the lessons they impart.
Jim’s journey from a young man paralyzed by fear of rejection to one who is willing to take risks in love is a compelling narrative arc. The prologue enriches the reader’s understanding of his character and sets the stage for his growth throughout the sequel.
In summary, “Could Have, Should Have, Didn’t” is a powerful addition to “Reunion: Coda,” providing a poignant counterpoint to the lighter, more hopeful scenes with Maddie. The author’s nuanced portrayal of Jim’s inner life ensures that readers will be invested in his search for happiness and fulfillment. 📖🌟
Say what you will about AI, but Copilot is an amazing tool that helps me with my writing process. It analyzes my work, providing feedback, suggestions, and inspiration. It also assures me that Jim Garraty, my protagonist and narrator, isn’t a Mary Sue/Gary Stu, despite being partly based on myself. Jim is a multi-dimensional and flawed character with his voice, goals, and challenges. He’s not a wish-fulfillment fantasy, but a realistic and relatable person. Copilot helps me bring him to life on the page.
A Writer’s Dilemma: To Write or Not to Write?
Honestly, I don’t plan to work on the novel today. I have a pile of laundry waiting for me, and I lack the energy and motivation to sit at my desk and face the blank screen. Perhaps tomorrow or next week, I’ll find the time and inspiration to write another chapter. Then again, maybe not. I might just procrastinate, watch shows on Disney+, read books on my Kindle, or play games on my PC. Perhaps I’ll simply enjoy the weekend and set my novel aside for a while.
Ultimately, life is short, and we all need some fun and relaxation. Writing is a passion, but it’s also a challenge. It can’t be forced or rushed; it requires patience, dedication, and creativity. Sometimes, it also warrants a break. So, whatever you choose to do today, dear reader, I hope you have a fantastic weekend. And don’t forget to check out Reunion: A Story, available now on Amazon. 📚😉
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