
From Awkward Misery to Adventure: A Readerโs Reflection on Comings and Goings
Thomas Wikmanโs recent Amazon review of Comings and Goings โ The Art of Being Seen offers more than praiseโitโs a quiet act of emotional recognition. In just a few paragraphs, he traces Jim Garratyโs journey from isolation to communion and affirms the emotional realism that anchors the Garratyverse.

โJim Garraty is a first-year student at Harvardโฆ He feels lonely, awkward, and out of place until a girl, Kelly Moore, takes interest in him, and his miserable night turns into quite an adventure.โ
This momentโKellyโs noticingโis not just a plot turn. Itโs an emotional pivot. Wikman sees it clearly: the shift from being unseen to being chosen, from awkward misery to adventure. Itโs the kind of recognition that makes a reader feel like a co-narrator, not just a consumer.

Wikman also frames the novelette as both a prelude and a companion to Reunion: Coda, suggesting that Comings and Goings could be โone of the many chapters in the life of Jim Garraty.โ Thatโs exactly right. The Garratyverse isnโt linearโitโs recursive. Each story echoes motifs of memory, music, and emotional inheritance. Each chapter is a lived texture, not just a narrative beat.
โWhat stands out about this book is the realistic description of emotions, inner thoughts, and the realistic dialogue.โ
This line is especially meaningful. It affirms the editorial vigilance behind every sentence, and the emotional cadence that guides every scene. Dialogue here isnโt just speechโitโs communion. And emotional realism isnโt just a styleโitโs a promise.
To readers who are new to the Garratyverse: Comings and Goings is a gentle invitation. To those returning: itโs a memory fragment, a motif echo, a reminder of what it means to be seen.
Thank you, Thomas, for treating this story as living memory.
Postscript: This review marks the first public mention of โthe Garratyverseโโa term that honors the emotional continuity, motif echoes, and lived texture of Jim Garratyโs world. Iโm quietly moved by this recognition. Thank you, Thomas Wikman, for naming what Iโve only whispered.

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4 responses to “‘Comings and Goings’ Gets New Amazon Review from ‘Super Facts’ Blogger Thomas Wikman”
Thank you so much, Alex, for so kindly highlighting and praising my review. And thank you so much for the reading experience.
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You’re welcome! I noticed that “Comings and Goings” had a new rating on Amazon (7 instead of 6), and lo! There it was! A new review. It made my day….or what was left of it.
I’m glad that you enjoyed Jim and Kelly’s night together, and that it resonated with you. That’s always my fondest wish as a writer…and the royalties don’t hurt, either. ๐
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I’ll make a blog post too in a couple of days
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I’m looking forward to it! Thanks, Thomas.
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